Preface |
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1 | (32) |
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The Characteristics of Good Legal Writing |
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4 | (6) |
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4 | (2) |
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6 | (1) |
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7 | (2) |
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9 | (1) |
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9 | (1) |
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Three Types of Legal Writing |
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10 | (3) |
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10 | (1) |
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Litigation-Related Writing |
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11 | (1) |
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12 | (1) |
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The Ultimate Consequence of Drafted Documents |
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13 | (2) |
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Drafting as a Facilitator of Self-Government and Economic Enterprise |
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15 | (1) |
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Drafting as a Form of Preventive Lawyering |
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16 | (1) |
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Drafting as an Intellectual Exercise |
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17 | (6) |
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17 | (2) |
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19 | (1) |
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20 | (2) |
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22 | (1) |
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22 | (1) |
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Drafting as a Literary Exercise |
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23 | (3) |
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23 | (2) |
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25 | (1) |
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Other Word Construction Techniques |
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25 | (1) |
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26 | (1) |
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Drafting as an Ethical Exercise |
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26 | (2) |
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The Costs of Bad Drafting |
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28 | (2) |
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28 | (1) |
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29 | (1) |
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30 | (1) |
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30 | (3) |
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33 | (22) |
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The Role of the Contract Drafter |
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33 | (1) |
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Recurring Problems in Contract Drafting |
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34 | (6) |
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34 | (2) |
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Documents Intended to be Contracts That Fail |
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36 | (1) |
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Contracts Containing Gaps |
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37 | (1) |
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Ambiguous and Unnecessarily Vague Terms |
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38 | (1) |
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39 | (1) |
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40 | (1) |
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41 | (11) |
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41 | (1) |
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41 | (1) |
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42 | (2) |
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44 | (1) |
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45 | (1) |
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45 | (5) |
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50 | (1) |
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51 | (1) |
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51 | (1) |
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51 | (1) |
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52 | (3) |
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55 | (30) |
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55 | (1) |
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The Functions of the Legislative Drafter |
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56 | (3) |
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Legislation Compared to Private-Law Documents |
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59 | (11) |
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Nature and Size of the Audience |
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60 | (2) |
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62 | (1) |
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63 | (1) |
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The Need for Factual Data |
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64 | (1) |
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64 | (1) |
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Fitting the Document Into an Existing Body of Law |
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65 | (1) |
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66 | (3) |
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69 | (1) |
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70 | (1) |
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70 | (7) |
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71 | (1) |
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71 | (1) |
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72 | (1) |
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72 | (1) |
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73 | (1) |
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73 | (1) |
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73 | (1) |
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74 | (1) |
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75 | (2) |
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77 | (8) |
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When Are Amendments Drafted? |
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77 | (1) |
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The Parts of an Amendment |
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78 | (1) |
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79 | (3) |
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Amendments Changing a Judicial Interpretation or Construction |
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82 | (3) |
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The Rules of Interpretation |
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85 | (29) |
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86 | (2) |
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88 | (26) |
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89 | (1) |
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The Plain Meaning or Four Corners Rule |
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89 | (2) |
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The Mischief Rule and Other Evidences of Intent |
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91 | (1) |
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92 | (2) |
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The Rule of Strict Construction |
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94 | (1) |
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94 | (1) |
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Statutes in Derogation of the Common Law |
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95 | (1) |
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Statutes Depriving a Court of Jurisdiction |
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95 | (1) |
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Statutes in Derogation of Sovereignty |
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96 | (1) |
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The Rule of Liberal Construction |
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97 | (1) |
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The Rule of Expressio Unius Est Exclusio Alterius |
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97 | (3) |
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The Rule of Ejusdem Generis |
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100 | (2) |
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The Rule of Noscitur a Sociis |
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102 | (1) |
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The Rule of Reddendo Singula Singulis |
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103 | (1) |
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The Rule of Last Modification |
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104 | (1) |
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The Rule That Handwritten Words Prevail Over Typed or Printed Words |
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104 | (1) |
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The Rule That Written Amounts Prevail Over Arabic Number Amounts |
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105 | (1) |
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The Rule That Specific Statutes Prevail Over General Statutes |
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106 | (1) |
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The Borrowed Language Rule |
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106 | (1) |
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The Rule Favoring Agency Interpretation |
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107 | (1) |
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The Rule That a Document Must Be Read as a Whole |
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108 | (1) |
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The Rule of Construing Statutes in Pari Materia |
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108 | (2) |
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The Rule Disfavoring Repeals By Implication |
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110 | (1) |
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The Rule of Lex Posterior Derogat Priori |
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111 | (1) |
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The Rule of Construing a Document Against the Drafter |
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111 | (1) |
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The Rule of Adopting a Construction That Favors Validity |
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112 | (1) |
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The Rule Favoring the Construction of Contracts in a Manner Consistent With Public Policy |
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113 | (1) |
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114 | (29) |
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114 | (2) |
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Advertising Specialization or Concentration |
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115 | (1) |
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115 | (1) |
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Solicitation of Former Clients, Family, and Friends |
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115 | (1) |
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116 | (2) |
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118 | (5) |
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118 | (2) |
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Criminal, Fraudulent, and Prohibited Transactions |
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120 | (3) |
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123 | (1) |
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124 | (1) |
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125 | (4) |
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125 | (2) |
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Attorney-Client Privilege |
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127 | (2) |
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129 | (8) |
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Representation Against a Current Client |
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129 | (5) |
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Representation Against a Former Client |
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134 | (1) |
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135 | (2) |
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Former Government Lawyer-Drafters |
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137 | (1) |
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Dealings With Third Parties |
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137 | (2) |
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139 | (1) |
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Abetting the Unauthorized Practice of Law |
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140 | (1) |
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Providing Free Drafting Services |
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141 | (2) |
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143 | (17) |
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Determine the Client's Objectives |
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143 | (2) |
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145 | (1) |
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Explore the Broader Legal and Factual Context of the Document |
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146 | (3) |
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149 | (1) |
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150 | (1) |
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151 | (1) |
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Identify the Proper Legal and Factual Concepts |
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152 | (1) |
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153 | (2) |
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155 | (3) |
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155 | (1) |
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156 | (1) |
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156 | (1) |
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Terms Creating Legal Consequences |
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157 | (1) |
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157 | (1) |
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Review the Document for Substance and Style |
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158 | (1) |
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Post-Execution Monitoring |
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159 | (1) |
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PART II. PREPARATION AND PLANNING |
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160 | (20) |
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Determine Client Objectives |
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160 | (9) |
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160 | (2) |
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How the Information Is Used |
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162 | (2) |
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Objectives From a Variety of Perspectives |
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164 | (1) |
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Other Parties to the Transaction |
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164 | (1) |
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165 | (1) |
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Multiple-Client Objectives |
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166 | (2) |
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Evaluating Client Objectives |
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168 | (1) |
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169 | (5) |
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170 | (1) |
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Characteristics of the Audience |
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171 | (2) |
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Accommodating the Various Audiences |
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173 | (1) |
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Determine the Context of the Document |
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174 | (6) |
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174 | (3) |
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177 | (3) |
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180 | (14) |
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180 | (3) |
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183 | (2) |
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185 | (4) |
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185 | (1) |
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186 | (1) |
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Permission and Authorization |
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187 | (1) |
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Denial of Permission or Authorization |
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188 | (1) |
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188 | (1) |
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188 | (1) |
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Creating Legal Checklists |
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189 | (1) |
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Drafting With Statutory Language in Mind |
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190 | (4) |
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194 | (24) |
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194 | (3) |
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194 | (1) |
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Going to the Essence of the Transaction |
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195 | (1) |
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196 | (1) |
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197 | (1) |
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Substantive Term Checklists |
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197 | (12) |
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198 | (1) |
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198 | (11) |
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The Elements of a Legal Rule |
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209 | (4) |
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209 | (1) |
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210 | (1) |
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210 | (1) |
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210 | (1) |
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211 | (2) |
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213 | (5) |
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Choosing the Right Concept |
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218 | (20) |
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218 | (1) |
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The Importance of Concepts in Drafting |
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219 | (1) |
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219 | (18) |
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219 | (2) |
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221 | (1) |
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222 | (5) |
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227 | (7) |
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234 | (2) |
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236 | (1) |
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Choosing the Right Word to Reflect the Concept |
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237 | (1) |
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238 | (12) |
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238 | (5) |
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243 | (2) |
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245 | (5) |
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245 | (2) |
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247 | (1) |
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247 | (1) |
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Familiar Before Unfamiliar |
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247 | (1) |
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248 | (1) |
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248 | (1) |
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Substance Before Procedure |
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248 | (2) |
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PART III. DRAFTING TECHNIQUES |
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250 | (59) |
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250 | (1) |
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The Consequences of Ambiguity |
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250 | (2) |
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252 | (57) |
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252 | (4) |
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256 | (1) |
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257 | (2) |
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259 | (4) |
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263 | (2) |
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265 | (3) |
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268 | (3) |
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271 | (2) |
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Days, Weeks, Months, and Years |
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273 | (3) |
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Bimonthly, biannually, bienially, semimonthly, and semiannually |
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276 | (1) |
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276 | (1) |
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277 | (1) |
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278 | (1) |
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279 | (1) |
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280 | (1) |
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281 | (1) |
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282 | (1) |
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283 | (1) |
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284 | (1) |
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285 | (5) |
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290 | (1) |
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290 | (1) |
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291 | (1) |
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291 | (4) |
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295 | (1) |
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295 | (2) |
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297 | (1) |
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298 | (1) |
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299 | (2) |
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301 | (2) |
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303 | (6) |
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309 | (65) |
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309 | (6) |
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310 | (1) |
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Consistent Grammatical Structure |
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311 | (2) |
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Consistent Document Structure and Approach |
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313 | (2) |
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315 | (33) |
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315 | (1) |
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316 | (2) |
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Redundant Couplets, Triplets, and Other Chain Synonyms |
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318 | (7) |
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Other Redundant Expressions |
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325 | (1) |
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326 | (5) |
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Compound Prepositions and Prepositional Phrases |
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331 | (3) |
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334 | (1) |
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Rhetorical and Transitional Words and Phrases |
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335 | (2) |
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337 | (1) |
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Unnecessary who's, which's, and that's |
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338 | (2) |
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340 | (2) |
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342 | (1) |
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343 | (2) |
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345 | (1) |
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346 | (2) |
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348 | (18) |
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348 | (1) |
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Simple Sentence Structure |
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348 | (3) |
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351 | (1) |
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351 | (4) |
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355 | (2) |
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Technical and Trade Terms |
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357 | (2) |
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Foreign Words and Phrases |
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359 | (1) |
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Words Ending in -ee and -or |
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360 | (1) |
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Compound Adjectives and Noun Phrases |
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360 | (1) |
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Unconventional Capitalization |
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361 | (1) |
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361 | (1) |
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Positive Versus Negative Expression |
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362 | (1) |
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363 | (1) |
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364 | (1) |
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365 | (1) |
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366 | (8) |
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374 | (31) |
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General Principles of Usage |
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375 | (9) |
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Terms With Established Meanings |
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376 | (1) |
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Terms of Art and Technical Terms |
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376 | (1) |
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Humpty-Dumpty Definitions |
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377 | (2) |
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379 | (1) |
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380 | (2) |
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382 | (2) |
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384 | (3) |
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Definitions Incorporated By Reference |
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387 | (1) |
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Types of Definitions and Terminology |
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388 | (10) |
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388 | (2) |
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390 | (3) |
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393 | (1) |
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393 | (1) |
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394 | (1) |
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Combining Full and Partial Definitions |
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395 | (1) |
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396 | (2) |
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398 | (2) |
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398 | (1) |
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398 | (1) |
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398 | (1) |
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Identify Specific Referents |
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399 | (1) |
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Indicate Relationship to a Larger Unit |
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399 | (1) |
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400 | (1) |
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When to Draft Definitions |
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401 | (1) |
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402 | (3) |
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Terms Creating Legal Consequences |
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405 | (28) |
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The Importance of These Terms |
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405 | (1) |
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Identifying and Creating the Appropriate Legal Consequences |
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406 | (1) |
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407 | (3) |
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The Suggested Conventions |
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410 | (19) |
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410 | (1) |
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410 | (3) |
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413 | (1) |
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414 | (2) |
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416 | (1) |
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417 | (1) |
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Surrendering Rights or Causes of Action |
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418 | (1) |
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419 | (2) |
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421 | (1) |
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422 | (1) |
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422 | (1) |
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422 | (3) |
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425 | (1) |
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426 | (1) |
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Terms of Assurance or Warranty |
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427 | (1) |
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428 | (1) |
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429 | (1) |
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429 | (2) |
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When Not to Follow These Conventions |
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431 | (2) |
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Document Typography and Layout |
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433 | (22) |
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433 | (8) |
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434 | (1) |
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434 | (2) |
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All Capitals and Underlining |
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436 | (1) |
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437 | (3) |
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440 | (1) |
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440 | (1) |
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441 | (1) |
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441 | (14) |
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442 | (1) |
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442 | (1) |
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Numbered or Lettered Paragraph Headings |
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443 | (2) |
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445 | (1) |
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446 | (4) |
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450 | (1) |
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451 | (2) |
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453 | (2) |
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Reviewing and Revising Drafted Documents |
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455 | (19) |
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456 | (9) |
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465 | (3) |
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465 | (1) |
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466 | (1) |
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467 | (1) |
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468 | (1) |
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Review for Style and Usage |
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468 | (6) |
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